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on September 18, 2021
at 6:42 pm
Island Girls, an adventure webcomic – Page 28: Discovery
©2020 Scribes Unlimited Publishing
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Oh man, we don’t like that look in Leilani’s eyes. She’s the first girl in Bora Bora to face a challenge or take a dare. And this is the start of a great adventure that begins in the deepest depths of the South Pacific ocean, and culminates in a fight for survival in the dense jungle.
And Jack’s disappearance all but certainly is linked to it all…
Stay safe and healthy out there, okay? Together, we’ll make it! ♥♥♥
Written by P.M.Amaras & Paul Driggere
Artist: Ralph del Mundo, of “Rock and Rock Diesel Zombies”
Want to join our Patreon for special stuff like naughty pin-ups and sexy short comics?
Don’t mean to be repetitious, but their is no cross-feed from the “Private” comments on Patreon . I’ll say it again here to get the Ball Rolling:
That last Panel, the Image is a little Confusing. those are Lailani’s Knees , Correct? So she and Kalea are having this Entire Segment of their Conversation, while She is entering the terminal portion of a Dive. Can Leilani control the Gravitational Constant, or do “Bullet Time” like Neo? Maybe Lailani just Talks V-E-R-Y F-A-S-T when She’s Excited.
Well, yeah she’s hopping out of the tree and speaking. I wouldn’t worry too much about the “gravity” aspects here, my man, this is a comic, after all. 😀 We’ve seen this done in many a comic before, for example, Superman notoriously talks as he’s landing after flying faster than a speeding bullet, etc. 😀
No worries! I’m just having a little fun. Like I said Analysis is what I DO.
LOL! It’s all good! 😀 Stay safe!
Attempted Compliment to the Artist – Take THREE
[in Response to the PATREON Page 35 Teaser]
Ralph:
The Ladies you have introduced us to so Far: Huana, Kalea, and Lailani are ALL Alluring and Sexy in Their Way. Your Style has captured the best Aspects of 3 Wildly different Types.
By Type, I do NOT mean Personality Type. That is another discussion entirely. No these Three are completely Different Somatotypes – Respectively: Mesomorph, Endomorph, and Ectomorph.
Not to get too Technical …
[Oh! Who am I Kidding!!]
• Huana is the Natural Athlete of the Group. On the Surface, that woman Swims like a Hydrofoil! She may not be the Best Diver. All that Extra Bulk She carries so Attractively comes with an Increased Need for Oxygen. She’s a Sprinter, not a Distance Runner.
• Kalea, IF she was as as Active as Huana, or Trained like Leilani, might actually BE the Best Diver. She has a Naturally Lower Metabolism, and a Body Built to Retain Heat. Sadly other evident Aspects of her Type mean SHE likely doesn’t Think so.
• Leilani is the most Admirably Trained and Conditioned of the 3, [of Necessity.] She’s a Human Radiator, with a Naturally HIGH Metabolic Rate. She would fare better in the3 Hot Sun than Kalea OR Huana, but would suffer the COLD of the Deep Water More. She can’t gain Weight as Easily as Kalea, or Muscle Mass, like Huana, without a great deal of effort. This, even though She likely Eats like a House-on-Fire.
There is Ample Opportunity for Banter, and Humor, even a few, Judicious Anime Cliches, but that’s for the Writers. I LOVE what you’ve done with the way it’s all Presented.
Now how the Hell am I going to wait for 7 Pages to See Lailani’s Abs!!
We’re going to try really hard to adapt all the girls into their own styles and personalities and skills. Hopefully readers like what they see. 😀
NO Complaints here! well Maybe one. Perhaps Leilani will engage her Core paddling that Skimmer.
I love the way these two Reflexively Compete, [even with no Men around.]
HIP-Swing VS. Under-BOOB- You’d almost think they Knew they had an Audience.> 8D
… and, of Course, I can’t Edit that!
She would fare better in the Hot Sun than Kalea OR Huana
*SIGH*
Now THAT is annoying! All of the Comments before Page 25 have been scrubbed.
Were they Collateral Damage of restarting the Website?
No, I think page 25 was the first comment we’d gotten. When we started the site, we uploaded the first 25 pages.
Really?!! I seem to recall makings comments on 5, 12, 13, 14, 16, 17, 19, and, at length, on 21, 23, and 24. I also seem to recall getting an Answer on Pg. 16.
Well, then that’s weird.
We had someone working on the site the other day. Maybe something got flushed. Will check.